Overall i feel my college magazine could of been improved in a number of ways. The first thing i could of changed is the layout on the page. My caption "You're never too cool for S'cool" could of been placed under the title of the magazine. This would of made it more professional.
The other caption"And its free" could of been placed above the barcode and also been smaller to allow more space.
I also could of had a colour scheme, if i would have had used red for my font throughout it would of matched my contents page, this would of made my magazine look more professional.